Tuesday, February 1, 2011

The were is the love reflection

I like the were is the love  reflection beacuse  it was really nice and it made me feel really great inside. it felt inside  that there are people that are  dieing  also the rythm was really nice beacuse i thought that song was wonderful and had a good beat to  it  the music video was really really great and nice it made me think that people shpuld not like do bad stuff in there life so that what i did on my reflection bye bye
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  1. Ms. LeeFebruary 12, 2011 at 11:02 PM

    Thanks for your reflection, Sabryn.

    You've improved since the last one. Good for you. Please remember to edit/spell-check your work. If you re-read your reflection above, you'll notice there is only one period. I also encourage you to explain your thoughts more clearly. For example, why did it make you feel good inside?

    P & L,

    Ms. Lee

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